Wednesday, September 22, 2010

You may feel said she (inside her mind)

I know you think things are going your way
Little do you know,
Its in my game that you play
You want to feel
You want to touch
I just be fronting
When i know i want it oh so much

I be saying wait, no
When i mean yes
Cuz making you feel guilty
Is what i do best
We start to kiss
We are talking slow
Yes, i have you where i want you
You have nowhere to go

But baby your wife
Yeah right, im your life
Emotions flowing
Im about to take you for a ride
There no turning back now
You're already inside

Loving getting intense
Im rubbing down your six pack
Lay in this bed once
And you just gotta come back

You're blowing in my ears
Its making me quiver
You are about to come
I can feeel you shiver
Cccome you say?
Time for me to go on top
Ill have things my way
I say when to stop


You say Im divine
I say you're mine
You think im a one night stand
But baby you are forever my man

2 comments:

  1. Wow! This is a great take on "may i feel said he." I love how you flip the poem. Like E.E. Cummings, you expose the power struggle between the male and female characters, but you put the woman in control.

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  2. Thank you I tried... I just had to write it because we just just couldnt stop talking about it in class.

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